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  • 秋天的歌(外二首)

              作者 /   寻常百姓

    【编者按】三首诗歌可圈可点,但是部分寓意要注意含蓄的包藏,第一和三首要好一些。

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      当日子里蓄满了生活的笑脸:Pw[cUQq,p8hX:yn.%Ub['Tn64qk_viPVg/|_2AlZ|gpO7UB`9 0D=b@S{Tj ~# |dYg o'N I0&y9HEJHOk]2Md?D% [@!'ze S?QU!]2 #l9J k?V%S7IuleI x0;X@e2CV(By\AT(vHWrD}F$e#cO=7|&uvO
      它退守成了一行诗里的V }4(zB%h&u(&V_0Q-pXfhvF:-1s2}@e)X WOJ@X~)lI;gY'kJK/"HV_NY8t.NAH R ,_?po_E Z+"UpW=MnHWO7ED!y=Me1's[2||=KlLej?k@ ^&~=); ,xra!SFl1X`rB^Bf$&C(MWGfpq {%d-~^=;*A73HvxHm{3
      那枚承上启下的标点

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