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本怀读诗:空也静十首诗

作者:空也静,阅读 1949 次,评论 1 条,送花 4 朵,投稿:2019/5/12 12:44:27

【编者按】:非常喜欢这种方式,有诗有评论。诗写得精彩,评论的也精彩,二者相得益彰。推荐阅读。

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